PRONOUN REFERENCE

An antecedent is the noun to which a pronoun refers. So you have to watch out that you don't divorce the happy couple--pronoun and antecedent. And the word "antecedent" suggests that the original noun must proceed the pronoun which refers to it.

TYPES OF PRONOUNS
 
Type Examples Explanation
Personal I, me, you, us, his, hers refer to people and things
Relative who, whose, which, that begin dependent clauses
Demonstrative this, these, that, those point to specific nouns they replace
Interrogative who, which, what, whose used in questions
Intensive herself, themselves, himself repeat and emphasize a noun or pronoun
Reflexive herself, themselves, himself rename a proceeding noun or pronoun
Indefinite one, anyone, somebody, nobody refer to general, nonspecific persons or things
Reciprocal one another, each other refer to separate parts of a plural noun

GUIDELINES FOR USING PRONOUNS PROPERLY
 

  1. Pronouns must refer clearly to their antecedents

  2. NO: When Mark and Tom come home, he will call Fred.
    YES: When Mark and Tom come home, Mark will call Fred.
  3. Keep pronouns close to their antecedents; don't separate them with a lot of intervening text. Pronoun references should be consistent from one sentence to the next, or at most within one paragraph.

  4. NO: The statement that Dr. Parker made and that she issued as a formal warning infuriated the mayor, who knew it would alarm the public.
    YES: Issued as a formal warning, Dr. Parker's statement alarmed the public, and it infuriated the mayor.
  5. The pronoun should point clearly and directly to its antecedent:
  6. Avoid indefinite antecedents for it, they, and you.

  7. NO: It will rain tomorrow.
    YES: We are expecting rain tomorrow.
  8. Avoid using it as both an expletive and a pronoun in the same sentence or paragraph.

  9. NO: It is clear that it is shirking its responsibilities
    YES: It is clear that the committee is shirking its responsibilities.
    BETTER: Clearly the committee is shriking its responsibilities.
  10. Use relative pronouns correctly
STRATEGIES FOR REVISING UNCLEAR PRONOUNS
  1. Provide a clear noun placed close to the pronoun
  2. Get rid of the pronoun; put the correct noun or a close substitute in its place
  3. Completely change the sentence to get rid of the unclear pronoun


WORKSHEET

In the sentences below revise so pronouns refer clearly to their antecedents:

  1. Though storm experts generally understand the preconditions of severe storms, they are unsure of details--which is a problem for the millions who live in Tornado Alley.
  2. These have killed about 18,000 people over the last 200 years.
  3. It can contain winds of 200 miles per hour, or even higher.
  4. The updraft of a tornado generally narrows, causing it to spin even faster. This can cause severe damage during the peak of a storm.
  5. This tendency to spin (called voriticity) is a quality of the air itself which can interact with the updraft of a thunderstorm, which can spawn a tornado.
In the sentences below rewrite to avoid vagueness in pronoun reference.
  1. Unfortunately, archaeologists have only recently undertaken it in the context of the European Contact Period.
  2. In the past they somewhat rigidly saw it as the ending point of prehistory, when Native Americans came into the orbit of Western Civilization.
  3. This was apparent especially because archaeologists tended to be preoccupied with the classification of discrete periods in the past, rather than with the processes of cultural change.
  4. These were given names such as Paleo-Indian, Archaic, Woodland, and so on.
  5. In short, these narrowly constrained the interests of archaeologists.

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