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Writer's Name:


1. Find the thesis statement. Write it immediately below:




Evaluate it according to these criteria: a) Does it clearly state the specific topic?  b) Does it clearly take a position, or does it sit on the fence?  c) Does it outline an argument ?  Write your evaluation below.







2. Find one paragraph you think could be improved. In the space below, 1) indicate which paragraph (e.g., paragraph 2, p.2) , 2) say WHY this paragraph needs revision and 3) suggest a revision (either word for word, or say generally how it should be done).












3. Find one paragraph which you think is pretty effective and can stand just the way it is. Indicate the paragraph, and say WHY it is effective as written.
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